These are the comments made by my teacher in regards to my Draft Digipak and Magazine Adverts. The majority of the targets simply require a few tweaks to make a better Digipak and Magazine Advert. For the most part, they make sense. The bottom one: 'Why a Chinese proverb?' is difficult to answer. I knew I wanted to include a quote on my digipak and therefore went looking for one. The quote needed to relate to my album's name and the song choice and therefore i went looking for meaningful quotes that were about vengeance. The one that i found which related extremely closely to our song choice just happened to be a Chinese proverb. Other pieces of criticism such as 'Release date must be a Friday' had surprised me, however it taught me about media conventions that had to be met (In this case Albums typically being released on a Friday). These targets will be fairly simple to complete and could be met soon. I will upload improved Draft Digipak and Magazine Adverts that meet this feedback's constructive criticisms.
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